Um, number one, this isn't even long enough to be a story; number two, your grammar and spelling are atrocious, and number three, your rhyme scheme doesn't even really rhyme. "Sorry" & "unnecessary" - "days" & "away"? Sorry honey, that doesn't rhyme... I would definitely export this... and quickly.

Much love

Kittie

Another great poem. I love the first two lines, they really got me thinking of situations like that in life. Excellent. ]

It's ashamed how sometimes we never see what we have until it's gone. Keep it Up!