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Reviews For: Two Halves of a Whole
no.peace.los.angeles 2008-04-13 . chapter 1
I love the bit about feeling the tremor of the trains through the soil. Very original and it brings dimension to the piece. Cute poem. Keep writing! :)
flawlessangel08 2008-04-10 . chapter 1
Aww so sweet. good poem
Faith Adeline 2008-04-09 . chapter 1
very cute. I liked it :)
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