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| Padfoot139 2008-07-03 ch 1,  | abusevery interesting, though i was kinda hoping for a sad ending lol. it just seemed like it was leading that way then: Surprise! XD and yes, linkin park is a good band ^_^ the only complaint i have is maybe spacing the paragraphs so it doesn't look so bunched in together and it'll make it easier to read, but that's a easy thing to fix. other than that, it was pretty detailed and held my attention to the very end, so good job =) |
| Silveralsa 2008-04-17 ch 1, | abuseLol, yay for happy endings! I totally didn't expect it :D |