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Reviews For: That day he stared at me

Matthew Jankiewicz
2008-05-04
ch 1,
abusevery interesting poem...made me think. At first I thought the poem was a love poem, but you made it very clear that it wasn't. Great job. Keep up with the great ideas!
Peanuts Factory
2008-04-10
ch 1,
abuseWhy do we work?

A question we will never have
a definite answer to.

Great poem, I liked it.
Rynx-too-genki
2008-04-10
ch 1,
abuseVery interestng... Complentative yet expressive in its own way. A lovely poem. ^^
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