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| animefreakgirl 2008-04-10 ch 1,  | abuseWow...it's a great start. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. (: |
| misery sister 2008-04-10 ch 1, | abuseI find this extremely, no offense idiotic. You have this chance to present people your work, and you completely mess it up by not editing, and to me, it barely makes sense at ALL. You have a complete lack of punctuation, capitalization, your sentences run on, and some of your verbs are completely awry! If you're too lazy to do your own editing get a beta instead of ruining what could've been a good idea. Honestly, remove this story, edit it THEN you should try again. By submitting this awful, messy, unedited work, you don't give your story any justice at all. This story has hope, kindly edit before submitting your work, to avoid much criticism. Good luck with all of your future writing. |