Reviews for School Assignments from the Class from Hell

Reviews For: School Assignments from the Class from Hell

xxvisionaryxx 2008-06-22 ch 1,	abuseI thought that this was pretty good, though really sad. Kyle's bitterness about losing his leg and his future was really well built up and I liked the way that you didn't just have Ray as this monster. He was just a guy who was lied to have people look up to him. Vee - Reviewers Kingdom
MajesticWriter 2008-06-21 ch 1,	abuseA very touching story, even at the end when I was starting to sniffle in my computer chair towards the end of the story. I am sure that some people have had the same terrible thing happen with a stupid old man trying to impress themselves (all men try too). Okay, talking about narrators. Don't you think that even though this is a story that you are trying to tell that it might be more realistic if you had Kyle narrating? You could show so much more emotion with things like maybe how the words were hard to seep out of Kyle's mouth. How on earth could an anonymous narrator know so much about the mood he is feeling? Not really asking for a change but a little heads up on my part. (PS: I forgot to sign my signature on the last review "Wrists") Karen Co-Founder of the Reviewers Kingdom
Walking In Beauty 2008-04-12 ch 1,	abusewow!! school or not it's still really good. the way you left the end open was awesome ...the thought of them maybe getting together works. nice work cookie
Tohru Daihikashousha 2008-04-11 ch 1,	abuseI actually really liked this :) It's different from what you usually post on here, but very deep and almost touching. Thanks for posting it- you should post more like this, also :).
Mademoiselle Rouge 2008-04-10 ch 1,	abuseLove it. Love also how you put this under "general". When I saw the lack of tragedy or angst in the category thingy - and that's pretty rare from you - I was like...wow, what happened? and was expecting something not as angsty as usual. I was so wrong. LOL Great story. It's a oneshot, right?
Creative Tendencies 2008-04-10 ch 1,	abuseI know you said you don't really like this, but it's actually very good. The ending line made me grin. Just cuz it's not slash doesn't mean it's not bad, you know. :P You seem to have got stuck in the rut of writing slash, and while I enjoy some of your stories very much, pehaps it's time to try something new?
whatisit 2008-04-10 ch 1,	abuselol, not everything needs to be slash to be entertaining writing. suggesting the idea of them being involved after that sounds a littlen revolting to me :S but you are the owner here. i quite liked the end, i thought he was going to kill him and himself or something dramatic like that, but this way is much better (not that i agree with any of it, but it works better) cheers

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