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| Lady Fingers 2008-06-26 ch 1, | abusei really love this vase :P |
| Moon's Poetess 2008-05-24 ch 1, | abuseInteresting ideas =) I like the second stanza best... the shortest one, but the choice of words and sentence seem just right to me. The first two lines are also very good. Nice piece! Moon's Poetess |
| Kiss.Today.Goodbye 2008-04-17 ch 1, | abuseI love the first verse. Very unique and effective use of enjambement. Couldn't really interpret the meaning of the last two verses. I think you missed an "s" on "gypsies" in the final line. |