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Hoodwynk 2008-04-11 . chapter 1
I am truly sorry to say this, but why should she hate Dian? Dian is merely a woman looking for love and betterment in the world, however unscrupulous her methods may be. The King, however, owes Catherine either all the privilages that a wife should recieve from her husband; or happiness away from him if their marriage was unsatisfactory. Is not the King the problem?
Besides which, nicely written piece. Your not 'there' yet, but on the road. That sounds patronizing, but its definately a compliment. Nice Job.
fictionluvr 2008-04-10 . chapter 1
Very dramatically written. Made me want to look up more about them.
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