I don't usually review songs (mostly because I'm unsure of how to read them) but I thought this was well thought-out when I read this.

I really like the first two lines of the chorus. Also, the parts in italics interested me. Did you mean them to be 'whispered', almost echoed? That's what I imagined, anyway.

Interesting title, too, though the symbol you took for 'a' in 'take' is really a 'd' in Russian. =P That just amused me a bit.
Anywho, great work!