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| sylenctone 2008-05-10 ch 8,  | abuseMiles and Natasha, such fun together! No matter where those Green boys go, trouble seems to follow. I do rather wonder what happened to Winifred the squid. Giant squid probably live rather a long time. I also rather like the Bey of Blades. He seems like an alright fellow. They do seem to have a tendency to find villains who stop being so villainous when more dastardly villains show up. Your stories are quite a lot of fun! Thanks for writing! jess |
| S.J.Olusanya 2008-05-06 ch 2, | abuseI love this crime noir story its awesome, it has that Dick Tracy and Sin City feel to it and the narration of the story is captivating good job. |
| sylenctone 2008-05-01 ch 6, | abuseWell Charles has certainly ensured that his son will have a childhood very similar to his own! Though I must say he's likely a bit disappointed that he missed the Mongolian Death Worms. This was as fun as usual! Thanks for writing! Jess |
| sylenctone 2008-05-01 ch 4, | abuseOnce again, you've outdone yourself! The adventures of Charles and his son are just as much fun as those of Clark. I can't wait to see what Miles and Oswald get up to whilst Charles is on his assignment. After all, the kid's got a yeti that drinks hard liquor for a pet! Thanks for writing! --jess |
| S.J.Olusanya 2008-04-28 ch 1, | abuseThis is a cool detective story, I don't read them much but I found this one interesting especially with the whole 1930s era idea. |
| John Westcott 2008-04-26 ch 1, | abuseHard boiled P.I. action, proving you can do more than one style. I'm, as I always am, impressed and entertained by your original choice of story ideas, which are far from the mainstream I see on this site (you know what I mean: "High school student Jessica Chambers just found out she and her friends have awesome powers... like, come and read about them! GIGGLE! R&R!) But take heart, because you're outside the main stream you won't be as reviewed and beloved as some of those authors (many, if not most of which, are horrible). Still, I appreciate your dedication to your craft and being something truly original. Your research and story preparation is always inspiring to me. Just added this baby to my favorite stories. ;) All the best, JW |