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Moondog Dozier
2008-04-23
ch 1,
abuseGood mixture and continuation. I like how this circles around itself to a conclusive end statement. Pace-well done. MD:77.
aprettywar
2008-04-13
ch 1,
abusethis is great! i think the continuing theme of an apple works very, very well in this case. i especially like the second stanza... this all flows so well. keep up the good work!
Tytherpol
2008-04-10
ch 1,
abuse*_*
holy crap.
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