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| Moondog Dozier 2008-04-23 ch 1, | abuseGood mixture and continuation. I like how this circles around itself to a conclusive end statement. Pace-well done. MD:77. |
| aprettywar 2008-04-13 ch 1, | abusethis is great! i think the continuing theme of an apple works very, very well in this case. i especially like the second stanza... this all flows so well. keep up the good work! |
| Tytherpol 2008-04-10 ch 1, | abuse*_* holy crap. |