Hmm interesting, very interesting indeed... Good, no doubt, but it really makes you think.

I really liked the first two parts.. (though the last line not in parenthesis in the second one seemed a bit long) But the last one.. I dunno it was ok, but it wasn't the ending I was expecting. And I dont mean like the subject I mean the powerfulness of it.. if that makes sense at all. Anyhow it was a really interesting idea to put them like this and connect them like you did.

Interesting. . . I don't understand it very much, but I don't half your works. And no, I didn't here about that.

-Alex

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i don't like that last one. it's jut to harsh...but that's the world i guess. yeah, i've clenched the pen way to hard one, and it busted, and i've eased up on it since then, but it's still a hard grip.

i swear, you could write the letter 'i' and i think it'll be the best damn thing i've seen/read.

this was freaking awesome!