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losing gracie girl
2008-04-10
ch 1,
abuseit makes me smile...even though it really shouldn't cause it sounds so evil...tehe...

i like the second stanza best.

yours until the wind changes,
gg

(i know...boring review...i'm just to damn tired...2:48 in the morning and i still need to do my homework...)
just.because.lemonade.stand
2008-04-10
ch 1,
abuseoh man! i love it. i like:My aim was dead on
Their was no chance of survival
Adrenaline
Love
And testosterone
Make one hell of a scope

and: YAY! u figured out how to single space :)
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