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| Frore 2008-04-23 ch 1,  | abuseAw, my Jenn crafts such wonderful pieces! Very well written - how you manage to uphold a rhyme scheme solidly without sacrificing any meaning is beyond me. Reminded me a bit of Charlotte Bronte, but not Wuthering Heights, I promise. |
| no.peace.los.angeles 2008-04-11 ch 1, | abuseVery nice piece. I think the sonnet format works very nicely with the subject, as does the language you used. The second line is really my favorite of the piece. Lovely work. Keep writing! :) |
| Rose Valentine 2008-04-11 ch 1, | abuseBravo! Well done! |
| Random-Idiocity 2008-04-10 ch 1, | abuseVery well written. I like how its written in a sonnet form, they always make excellent poems. Keep it Up! |