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| she smolders 2008-04-25 ch 1,  | abuseI just love the simple eloquence of a haiku. Those last two words - perfection and sadness and beautiful. |
| sleeping Pisces 2008-04-11 ch 1, | abuseThought provoking haiku. Strong imagery, and kudos for use of the word 'erodes', well picked. Peace, Daze |
| Princess-anna57 2008-04-10 ch 1, | abuseFantastic haiku. Very well constructed. *claps*. Write on! ~Anna~ ^_^ |
| Random-Idiocity 2008-04-10 ch 1, | abuseExcellent haiku.. Keep it Up! |