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| misery sister 2008-04-19 ch 1, | abuseAll numbers from 0-100 should be spelled out, so your '15th birthday' should be 'fifteenth birthday'. [I loved him - he didn’t no...but I did.] - no should be 'know' Very random though, his confession of love. Maybe you could make the transition abit smoother. |