Reviews for Everything I Wanted

misery sister
2008-04-19
ch 1,

abuseAll numbers from 0-100 should be spelled out, so your '15th birthday' should be 'fifteenth birthday'.

[I loved him - he didn’t no...but I did.]

- no should be 'know'

Very random though, his confession of love. Maybe you could make the transition abit smoother.

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