O.O

this is fantastic as well. i envy your talent. you've got something amazing here.

the last line seems...unnessacary but at the same time it seems to add to the poem, i can't decide.


dunno but still it's beautiful,
nice.

Oh wow, this is totally interesting. *sits back and thinks*. Fantastic piece here. Everything fits together perfectly. Write on!

~Anna~ ^_^

I like the line about "liquid change." Very refreshing idea and a neat way to phrase it. I don't know that I like the "(just at night)" part at the end, though. It feels like it was just added on, and this is super nitpicky and minor, but I think you could move the period from after bright to after night, so it looks less fragmented. But like I said, that's minor. It's a very nice thought for the future. :) Keep writing! :)

:D
I love it.
Eco-wonderland.

I didn't understand how this had anything to do with being guiltless.