I haven't read any other stories "yet"... But I think... Ur an Incredible writer, and I really hope you'll continue writing because I really think you have a talent...

Best regards,
Julien

Good Luck and Have Fun writing! ( There'll be more for me to enjoy reading ;) )

i can relate with the last few lines.
like:
you don't love me
you never did
and you
never
will.
i do.

does lines i can really relate to. great job with the poem.

...O.M.G

I like the idea of this, but some of it went a bit odd... lol. The buying chocolate... would translate into buying love, which I couldnt tell if it meant trying to using prostitutes... it just seemed odd.

Also the ending. You end it with I do in response to him not loving you. That means you love yourself? I dunno that seemed odd.

Anyhow the easter thing and the chocolate thing in the beginning was really great and I like the whole sweet thing. Really great job.

Great job, I liked this line ''The memory of you lingers, but not the sweetness'' Keep it Up!