Reviews for Pippa's Toy Shop - FictionPress.com

DarkUni 2008-04-24 ch 1,	abuseSo creepy. This was awesomely twisted!
One-Hand Clap 2008-04-19 ch 1,	abuseEk! The imagery in this was great - I could see, in my MIND (yeah, thanks for that) the little girl cutting up her father, making him smaller, etc. I loved the twisted idea! So the imagery, the idea, yeah. Well done. It was so gory. Only one thing I wasn't so mad about - I understand that, since it's from a young girl's perspective, you have to be somewhat sparse with your langauge. But I think, if this girl is precocious enough to be that disturbed, you might as well go all out and make her one hell of an extremely gifted, extremely smart, extremely twisted little girl - if you rewrote this, I'd suggest you make her like a little, minature serial killer. With al the trimmings! This was great. - Clap Trap, from review Marathon (link in my profile)
Spork-a-rific 2008-04-13 ch 1,	abuseVery different. It's kind of funny, in a way :D What a creepy creepy little girl. I liked how she was this normal little kid who turned out to be way homicidal.
Anon. 2008-04-12 ch 1, anon.	abuseHow old is Pippa? She's a bit violent, but that's alright... Horror it is... not really HORROR outright, but good. I'm sure you've categorised it right...
Animty 2008-04-11 ch 1,	abuseI thought it was cool/ really scary. Better than what I write.