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| Moondog Dozier 2008-04-23 ch 1, | abuseThis exemplifies the bluesy feel well, because you've given it a different voice pattern than most of your works, like it's someone telling a friend what happenned in the situation with natural language progressions that would be true to the situation. Interesting read. MD:77. |
| prick 2008-04-16 ch 1, | abuseHoly **, I love this. It's so striking in its simple way, you have serious skill. I'm beyond jealous. "Presidential Seal", genius. |
| Julius Gillian 2008-04-12 ch 1, | abuseThe reality in this piece you portray is very striking. I can't help but wonder if you're making this up as a point of view in America, or if this is an actual event. It doesn't really matter one way or the other, it's very realistic and it's probably true to boot. I've lived overseas my whole life so I wouldn't know. :S Excellent, you're a terrific poet. Make more or I'll spam your e-mail with praise and brown nosing :P - Julian |