good...not sure I like rivers of flame, I mean I like it by itself just not here. like I'm not sure I like it being like the opposite of words of compassion. like I need to like stop sayin like...wow. and that's only four syllables. anyway I think there should be something more fitting to compassion.

umm yeah anyway why is components capitalized? I like that endin...good coupled haikus.

Very interesting and easy to relate to. Beautiful.
~kiwikiwi