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| Aucifer13 2008-04-11 ch 1, | abuseNice presentation =) Would this be persuasive or juz plain facts? All i see is the presentation of facts yet unless u come strong in pushing your ideas forward and putting more details and emphasist on "How the world stays together", then i would say it's just going to be one of those common factual essays that gives the message-read or don read, the world will still revolves that way Best regards /\ucifer13 |