Reviews for 14 Years Older than I

Reviews For: 14 Years Older than I

Imalefty 2008-05-24 ch 1,	abusestraight from the review marathon! (link in profile) i like how the parentheses separate the infatuated side with the more rational side. :) it was a nice little addition and gave insight to the whole character. i want to know who he is to her, though... a few more details would have been nice. is he her teacher? boss? i was left wondering. anyway, nice job. keep writing! -Lefty
Eve's Deception 2008-05-18 ch 1,	abusegang bang, rape him across the desk. snap his ruler in half and be unruly. maybe detention, maybe the cuffs. but oh so erotic and delicious in the dark. i shouldn't encourage you... because he is nothing you need-currently and you know what he did after hours...
britishslang 2008-04-30 ch 1,	abuseRereading this, I really like how the parenthesis is like an alter-ego. and i think there are quite a few people who can relate to something like this. hahah. namely, my eighth grade self, but I won't get into that. :P another piece of amazing work.
doxology 2008-04-15 ch 1,	abuseDefinitely a favorite, and I can totally relate. ME TOO. Actually, there's two guys I LOVE that are (14 years) older than I. One of them is one of my mom's friends. And (as well) I often think...two more years!! haha. I'm so pathetic. Oh well. Great poem. Peace & Love westnedge ~> park
Andrea Lotte 2008-04-12 ch 1,	abuseI like this...especially how the narrator keeps on adding bits in the brackets. I love the ending. Nice work!
Shasta Valentine 2008-04-11 ch 1,	abusehm. i like it, but i wish it wasn't so one-sided, you know what i mean i kinda wish i knew what he thought too. but good topic. -sv

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