That was REALLY good. could you write more? please? It was like really freaky but at the same time happy. He reminds me of like, the bad guy being a jerk to ppl for his own story enjoyment. FREAKY BUT AWSOME!

Very poetic. I love how you make the comparison of surgery to writing, about how similar they are "I would hold a pen like scalpels, trying to cut excess adverbs from my sentences..." but then show how a person's dreams make it so surgery is so much different than writing.