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| lsydsygnom 2008-07-07 ch 3,  | abusei think you should do whatever you feel is best for the story. so far i really enjoy the story and look forward to whatever update you decide to give to the readers. whether that be a new chapter or just a new spin on a old chapter. either way, ultimately it is your decision. happy writing! |
| EveningStar7 2008-07-06 ch 3, | abuseOkay so I really like the story so far. It's well written and I am VERY hooked on this game. Why the heck can't they play this in real life? Haha I'm kinda glad you are rewritting the second chappy. Because I wanted to kill Sam for leaving and not playing the game. So please.. Update soon! |
| lsydsygnom 2008-06-13 ch 2, | abusei love it! is it cameron? i kind of want it to be cameron...oh well, either way, it's fab, please continue! |
| gulistanlik 2008-06-03 ch 2, | abuseOkay, now I'm not so sure who kissed her, but it obviously someone who was intending on kissing her right from the start. I still think it's Cameron, but I can't be completely sure. Anywho, I'm interested as to what's going to happen. By what gather from the title, it's going to have a great deal to do with the mystery kiss? Yay! Might I suggest proofreading before you post? I spotted a couple spelling and grammatical errors. But nothing too big. Till the next chappie, gulistanlik |
| gulistanlik 2008-06-03 ch 1, | abuseIt was Cameron! It was definitely Cameron! But she would've recognised his voice...I think. Hmm. Must read on! gulistanlik |
| Kbelle1 2008-05-26 ch 2, | abusethought it was a good chapter...hope you continue!! |
| ParisLi 2008-05-25 ch 2, | abuseI liked this new chapter and I'm glad you're extending the story. Can't wait for the next chapter! |
| ohitislove13 2008-05-24 ch 2, | abusekeep writing! this is good! |
| CompletelyInsane 2008-05-24 ch 2, | abuseIt's different. I really like it. I'd love to see where you end up taking this story! |
| Kbelle1 2008-05-16 ch 1, | abuseThat was really good...hope you keep writing! |
| ellinikolouloudi 2008-04-13 ch 1, | abuseplease continue! I'd love to find out what happens/who kissed her. It's a great start to a story, don't let it go to waste! :D |
| Sapheneia 2008-04-13 ch 1, | abuseDuh you have to continue! She ahs to find out who kissed her! |
| NationChild 2008-04-13 ch 1, | abuseThis sounds like a very interesting game you have made up. Although I am a bit confused about the title... I like Sam's character, though. If you're to continue it, I look forward to the next chapter! ...And if you're not, I'll tell you that you've written a very light and humorous story, gripping me and persuading me to want to read more. NC |
| xLittleBlackConverse. 2008-04-13 ch 1, | abuseAWESOME!! The description of the kiss was really good and detailed. AND WOMAN, YOU HAVE TO MAKE THIS INTO A FULL STORY!! i mean its an awesome start, unique. And at the end, it was just like what the hell? You leave us after THAT? Damn, you better continue this! xo =] |
| Mad for Figs 2008-04-12 ch 1, | abuseI really enjoyed reading this, believe me. Your writing style is consistent and the title isn't generic. I understand leaving the ending as is for the sake of a cliffhanger. But I feel like in this case, it could go either way. Since you ended with a question, it's only logical to continue it. Had it ended with a statement? You get the point. I would love to see it continued, but obviously, the decision is ultimately up to you. Either way, I would love it because I just like the way you write. Happy writing :] |