You might have noticed that I put this on story alert. I think you should also be aware that you haven't updated in... over half a year. Maybe you could update, though. For me? Because I think that would be very nice. Very, very nice. Yeah. Hmm. Yeah. I think so. Anyway. Good writing, good plot. Very interesting.

oh, i love this story! xD it's so well-written and i like the characters a lot. i can't wait to see an update! :3

butbutbutbut... noo. *cries* Not continuing? Not...con...tinuing? *sinks to floor dramatically and sobs uncontrollably*

Meh, I respect your reasons. Please do let me know, however, if you do plan to continue. Pwetty pwetty please? I just started reading like... 20 minutes ago =] *adds story to alert*

When people write really close to their experience they get into this spot where they have to choose a path between literal truth (and too much exposure) and complete fiction (and the possibility of losing a bit of truth).

Choose more fiction, and you'll be able to keep the story and also your privacy. I mean, I wantr to read more of the story. But it's not that I want to be a voyeur: this story has a life separate from your own.

Just my thoughts.

He can get back in his box now. I'm thinking of putting a little water bottle thing in there and maybe some food. And bedding so if he has to poo and pee because I CAN NOT LET HIM OUT!

Crazy moment over.

"So I have no idea if I'll be updating this anymore or not." What is this? Is this your crazy moment? Well stop being crazy.

Of course you don't need privacy... You'll be like a story star! AND EVERYONE WILL LOVE YOU!

Kay?
Kay.

This seems like it's going to be a good story, though I don't understand why you need a Beta reader, I don't think I spotted any mistakes...but if you really want one I can do it.

So I don't know why but there was two things of your story thing up on my computer. I was all, "My computer must love your story."

Whateve! So! Of course there well be air holes... god.. Not trying to kill him.

Your amazing. I love you.

this is probably why they say write what you know. becuase it's a lot better - i'm into realism in a big way at the moment. and you do realism well. so yay! and i love the AIM conversations, it adds a cool and interesting element to the story

LOVE LOVE LOVE ADORE ADORE LOVE. You've got me hooked already, damnit xD I get really excited when I see these updates in my inbox.

And...I'm drawing a blank, critique-wise.

That is kind of bondage sex slave acting.

I have a box though... so he can like... go in it now and stay there. My nephew beats up Winnie the Pooh...

He likes to bit his little toy of Winnie the Pooh.

I could've died...

For realz. I frickin' LOVELOVELOVELOVELOVE Ben.

Love him.

I could lock him in a box and keep him forever... Seriously...

Very cute so far.

This is pretty cool. I'm already liking the characters.