I agree with InkAngel. I was also wondering how it would be science fiction, but now that you've mentioned the technology...

Also, I was wondering who Kazi's parents were, because if Warder is the son of Alpha, and Chulo and Mura are the Alpha's brother's (who I'm assuming is the Beta) children, then where does Kazi fit in? Because it's unusual for any wolf but the Alpha and Beta to mate.

Other than that, this story looks very interesting because you've used wolves instead of humans. I can't wait to see the next chapter.

Wow. When I started to read this story I was a little worried that it was going to be a slow-pace read... you definately proved me wrong. I like how you stepped right into the action with Mura's death,and I was deffinatly suprised to see that Chulo had arranged his own sister's death just to get rid of some pack compitition... Keep writing.