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Reviews For: I Want a Bird, Okay?

openheadspace
2008-07-04
ch 1,
abuseBAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! That was so WieRD! xDD
starlit x sky
2008-05-25
ch 1,
abuseHaha. This made me laugh so much.
I really liked this story (and the bird).
'Girl: "I love you, too."
Guy: "Yeah, don't forget the bird."'
I liked that bit.
Pinkamoo
2008-05-08
ch 1,
abuseHaha. Nice pattern you got there :p
I liked the story - and the bird, I can't forget the bird. Never.
Willowindrain
2008-04-20
ch 1,
abuseVery Cute ;) If what you wanted was to make someone laugh, I believe you've done just that. And they guy is quite fast on his feet when he said that the girl can be his 'bird'. I'm not sure if it's intentional or not but in London 'bird' is another way to say girl .

I'm not sure what made me click the link and then press the lavender button . ^.^ maybe it's just impulse.

For now
Let Them Eat Cake
2008-04-18
ch 1,
abusehahaha! that was really random and really cute! good job!

- Kay (Let Them Eat Cake)
MySunshine
2008-04-12
ch 1,
abuseuhm ... well, this was interesting ^^

the storyline was cute, but i personally don't like stories that are written like plays, because you just know what they say and not what they think - you know what i mean?

and it kind of moved a little too fast for me ..

but i kind of liked it ^^
xLittleBlackConverse.
2008-04-12
ch 1,
abusehahahaha!! OMG that was so cute!! And simple!! lol its really original too!! hehe aww i love it.
Melanie Thomas
2008-04-12
ch 1,
abuselol. That was cute^^
cue.dramatic.gasp.
2008-04-12
ch 1,
abuseThat was adorable. I enjoyed it. (:
Good job...humorous.
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