i hope u write more soon

That chapter made me cry! You're really good at pulling the reader into the story. I felt like I was there. Great work!

ah update please! need to read more :)

GET BACK TO THE STORY!
SOON!
I AM SUCH A BIG FAN OF YOURS!
I ABSOLUTELY LOVE ALL YOUR STORIES!
THEY R ALL GREAT! ESPECIALLY UR ONE-SHOTS!
PLZ CONTINUE WITH THIS STORY!
I LOVE IT TO DEATH!!
ur FAITHFUL FAN,
truebleu

I really hope one day is soon...

oh .m. GE! :D :D :D
aw. i just started reading this today.. and.. PLEASE OH PLEASE DONT STOP! :]
i'll be waiting for the next chapter! hope it's soon. :D :D :D
and i cried after eading one of the chapters.. i think its the one where she told Lid and Kyle that she's dying.. :/

In this first chapter, you have a lot of "your" when it should be "you're." You also have a lot of capital letters when it doesn't need to be. for example: "Reddish brown" when it should be reddish-brown. etc.

Anyway thought I'd begin helping you even though you haven't edited this yet. :P I know, I know. Me getting a head start. But hey now you have a crazy beta-reader, Coco! lol

I'm loving this story and I have a feeling that I might start crying when she dies so that just goes to show how wonderfully well you write! =D

Another thing, when I first read this, the plot immediately reminded me of this Japanese drama called 'One Litre of Tears' where the female protagonist dies from a degenerative disease but I've noticed that (so far) you tend to focus more on her social life as she lives with this cancer while in the drama, the story focuses on the progress of the disease and how it literally turns her life upside down. I just wanted to point that out but i think this is an AWESOME story and it's going to be on my favourite list! Update soon!! xD

aw, RL happens! we can all probably wait for an update.
don't worry, HC. :D

-toffeecakesxox.

Confused! Are you abandoning the story or not?? ?.?

HEHEH cute

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You know, when I started reading this I was totally for (and seriously, don't take this the wrong way, 'cause I'm about the most sensitive and caring person you could ever meet) Marie dying in the end, because it would be a good examination of a normal situation like that and you could examine all the poignant emotions from before and after. But now, after all the fluffiness and light, I kinda want to see Marie live and make the best of her new love (yes, love :P) with Kyle and just have everyone else appreciate life more. But maybe don't give that possibility until most of the months are up, so you still get the emotional journey. Anyway, I really can't wait 'til your next update.

Your last chapter made me go through several tissues, you know; and I HATE to cry. That, of course, means you're writing this story well.

Or actually, I was retarded and didn't notice the chapters option. Lovely. Would sleep-deprivation work as an excuse? Anyway, at least you know you've got a good set of characters and story line to work with. I'll get back to reading now, after my blush goes away.

That's so sad and depressing, but also intermixed with hope and light-hearted things. I know it's only going to end sadly and that it's a one-shot, but I'd actually very much like to see how this ends up. It could be a good short story.