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perpetual questions
2008-04-12
ch 1,
abusethe last stanza is a lovely end to a pretty poem.
East-0f-Eden
2008-04-12
ch 1,
abusei think this poem has a real "underwater" feel to it. You just look back and say what you remember. It's really descriptive.
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