I love this story it short,simple, and sweet. Reading about it gave me butterflies, great job.

This is such a cute story! I love it!

Really well written. You took a cliche and made it...erm, un-cliche. The characters have a few quirks that help define their personalities and the whole thing went smoothly. A lot of problems with one-shots is they tend to be rushed, but you started with a certain pace and kept it up. Really good job =3

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Aw I really liked this story! You could potentially take the concept of this story and make it longer, if you wanted to that is.

:-)

Cute
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ugh can't think of any words that would do this justice. that was too sweet :]

Oh, you made my eyes water a bit. And I could feel my heart tightening while reading this.

Beautiful story! ;D

do adorable!
Maybe you should make this into a full length story.
just kidding. Just relax and ideas will follow. :)

this was just so adorable 8)

hi!!

this story is so sweet!the plot is really well written and the characters are so cute=)

great job!

It was cute but I feel like the ending should have been different. I really wanted to Erica tell him no, to stand up for herself. Yes, she did when she broke up with him in the beginning, but I was still (only slightly) disappointed.

I loved this, it was so beautiful and well-written. It almost made me cry because of their break-up.

Great oneshot, keep up the good work.

cute. nice.

I thought that was an awesome short story good job:)