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| Ninavs 2008-05-07 ch 1,  | abuseYour fics are just soo cute! Loved it! |
| thoughtsofwisdom 2008-05-06 ch 1, | abuseaw that was really cute. |
| Never Loved Before 2008-05-02 ch 1, | abusekudos! nice. :] |
| X-Romantic-X 2008-04-27 ch 1, | abuseThat was very very good lol. I love your writing. Sad to see that you have not got inspiration. But, you could always write a full length story from one of your one shots, such as this. I think it would make a remarkable story!! |
| Pop the Bubble 2008-04-25 ch 1, | abuseaww that was gorgeous!! |
| BoysLikeGirls 2008-04-24 ch 1, | abuseaww that was so cute, even though it was a teeny bit rushed but i LOVED IT! |
| Lily Llynn 2008-04-21 ch 1, | abuseVery cute. Even though she was a bit pathetic, I love how she stood up to him, and he in turn, was VERY affected. (: Well-written, cliched but fluffy plot, and I love, of course. (: Kudos to woodstock1969 for adding this to our c2, and you for writing this, of course. (: *Oh and I also I love how she's not the typical pretty, etc. girl. (: |
| numbthepain 2008-04-20 ch 1, | abuseI loved it! It gives hope to girls like me and that whats i love the most LOL! Write more please! |
| starlit x sky 2008-04-18 ch 1, | abuseAw. It was sad when they broke up, but the ending was great. Justin was mean, but I'm glad he realised he was being an idiot. Great work! |
| dj-baker 2008-04-17 ch 1, | abuseAAHH! THAT WAS SO CUTE! BLESS! JEALOUSY IN A GUY IS THE BEST LOL ;P |
| Miss Toadstool 2008-04-17 ch 1, | abusethat was very, very cute! I love the little quirks you add about the characters, like the playing with the watch thing. and geeze, I knew a girl who had a boyfriend who was ashamed of her, though he wasn't man enough to apologize, and they just broke up. I guess what I'm saying is that this is a relate able situation, and that's good because otherwise it wouldn't interest people! and the part where he gets jealous is SO cute! well written piece :) |
| TennisObsessed 2008-04-16 ch 1, | abuseAh..I usually don't review that much, but LOVE your oneshots! They're so simple, easy to read and absolutely adorable! |
| Thats For My Memory 2008-04-16 ch 1, | abuseLoved it. Just absolutely loved it. Maybe because it hit home for me. You are an amazing writer. I hope to be going to one of your book signings one day ;] -Delilah |
| Camelia Sinensis 2008-04-16 ch 1, | abuseSweet and totally unrealistic. I loved it. (: |
| Misplaced Angel 2008-04-14 ch 1, | abuseAW, that is so cute. :) I really like it. |