very adorable.

and I love it how the mc is part asian ;D

goodness thats so cute it makes me want to cry.

cause of its cuteness .

amazing job!

Loved it.

i cannot even express how adorable this is, lol.

it was so good! and so cute!

I liked it. It was a bit rushed, but it was still cute. Keep it up, hopefully you get some inspiration soon :)

Faith

I didn't expect to like this story, and I was right. I LOVED it. It just flowed so well - the writing, the descriptions, the dialogue, everything. The characters had so much depth, and Erica is a heroine for all women everywhere. Her monologue just went through my heart. Justin was a jerk, and I'm glad she told him off!

Keep writing! )

so sweet. i really liked that one shot. sounds kinda like it was from a cliche type story!

I LOVE it! It was so sweet.

omgosh.

justin

is absolutely gorgeous.

i miss your stories

and how they have EVERYTHING i love.

too cute for words!

way awesome.

i lovee it.

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omgg this was so cute! loved it ) his whole freaking out thing that she was getting asked out... so funny! how did they even meet and talk if they didnt in school though?

go girl! haha...nice story. I didn't really feel that it was rushed. I mean unless you count how the week literally flew by. But that's common. Nice one-shot. I'm totally into good one-shots right now :)

Haha, this is so perfect. I loved the part where she told him off. Good job :)

aw! I like it. Cute! when I got to the part where he threw the guy up against the locker, I said to my friend "I'm reading a really good one-shot. Want me to send you the link?" haha! I liked it. I felt like she maybe took him back too quickly, but eh, love is love is love. What'd ya do? Anyways, very nice. :)