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| Lady-CheshireXIII 2008-04-12 ch 1,  | abusethe first line is wrong, it has to have five syllables, but it only has four. just a little constructive critisism, or at least it's supposed to be. |
| Tranquil Thorns 2008-04-12 ch 1, | abuseNicely done! I especially like the summer haiku, though the imagery is very good in all four poems. One thing I noticed - there seem to be two 'summer' poems, one in the third chapter and one in the fourth. Was this an error? |