Interesting addition. I like the chapter title. Nice work. Keep writing!

~Twilight Starr~

I like the work with Spirit's dialogue. It looks like he has a crush on Lily. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~

"The Blood Tree" is an interesting title. I like the name Cloud. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~

Neat. If i was Cloud i would have clawed his face off. No kidding... Anyways. Keep writing!

Hey there! Back for another reveiw! I would have to say that so far, Spirit is my fav. HE'S SO CUTE! I'm sorry i didn't review earlier... but i didn't have a chance. I'm going to send you an email tho, not now but really soon, i want to share a story idea that you might really like! (Involves cats! Lots and lots of cats!)

Wow. This story reminds me so much of a book series i'm seriously addicted to, called Warriors. It's about a bunch of cats in a Clan-like situation too! By my favorite part of this chapter is the names... Cloud, Ash, Stone, Soul, Blaze, Shade, and I can't think of any more...(Is there going to be a cat called Rain? Cuz if there is, it's my favorite!) The whole idea is very creative, i hope i'll be able to read more soon!