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| explosion of planes 2008-04-13 ch 1,  | abuse...and i fell, i fell. please tell me the girl/boy got her/his heart broken, yes? (i adore the detail you put into something so short, i think haikus are your specialty.) |
| Thoughtful Silence 2008-04-13 ch 1, | abuseLoved the imagery in this- especially 'granny smith apple eyes' I thought that was a lovely touch. Anyways, keep up the good work. -Silence |
| burning in effigy 2008-04-12 ch 1, | abusegorgeous imagery. and i love the title- cute and fits well with the mood of the haiku |
| Tranquil Thorns 2008-04-12 ch 1, | abuseLovely haiku. Love the comparison to fruits. |