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| electric feel 2008-06-12 ch 1,  | abusei like this a lot. and i'm glad (for the most part) you attack the photographer and his ego, rather than photography itself. i don't think photography in itself is always this inhuman and manipulative. but the photographer definitely is, and you conveyed that beautifully. |
| thursdays and rain 2008-05-27 ch 1, | abusebecause people in photographs are lies ~love that thought ;) |
| Stella Grimshaw. 2008-05-09 ch 1, | abuseThe last lines were the perfect bow on the fantastic poem. |
| Emily 2008-04-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh my god I LOVE this. (because people in photographs are lies)- it's brilliant This is really good, you're amazing! |
| baggageclaim 2008-04-13 ch 1, | abusethis reminds me of a conversation with the devil. i love "but i insist she is someone, she must exist...", and the way you use parenthesis (parenthesi? hah.) |
| call me ish 2008-04-12 ch 1, | abuseyesyesyes. fuck. this was... im smiling, im sad. im picking line after line to quote as extraordinary, but its turning out to be a playback of the entire thing. |
| RaindropsOnBlackRoses 2008-04-12 ch 1, | abuseI LOVE this one! |
| the big crunch 2008-04-12 ch 1, | abusewow. this is just... holy cow. it's late, and i'm not tapping into my voabulary. ugh. anyways, this piece reminds me of my photography teacher, kind of, except maybe younger than he is now. it was great, almost like a mini-story. i could picture the room, the people, the picture, everything. beautiful. |
| painted.music 2008-04-12 ch 1, | abusekonban wa I really loved this, especially the lines in parenthesis: "i've never seen you printed on paper and / i'm beginning to believe / you / aren't / real" -- That was my favorite line. Brilliant. Ha det -Shan- |