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| briannanicole768 2008-06-12 ch 1,  | abuseWow. So far everything I've read from you, I can absolutely relate to...and it's kinda eerie. Haha. I liked this one a lot... Keep up the good work! *Bri |
| Scarlett Wynter 2008-05-09 ch 1, | abusethis is beautiful. "the sky is no place for a crow without grace" is such a powerful image. the whole piece is just really emotionally impacting. great work. :) |
| The Hippie Nerd 2008-04-24 ch 1, | abuseI really liked this. What a sweet piece, gets me thinking about me and my mother. I especially liked the line "You see the good in life, and I see blind." |
| Bazooka Joy 2008-04-22 ch 1, | abuseI'm very close to my mother and indeed I do forget to say "I love you". This is a real beautiful piece. If only I can make my own version and translate it to my mom. |
| aprettywar 2008-04-21 ch 1, | abusethis is a wonderful piece! there is nothing like the love of a mother and child; you've captured those emotions really well. keep it up! |
| New life for the Undead 2008-04-16 ch 1, | abuseAw this is adorable good job it almost made me cry T.T jk but it was pretty close :) |
| The Reverse Edge Blade 2008-04-15 ch 1, | abuseYou have a gift for rhyming! your short sentences were beautiful, and your setup with one simple verse was powerful. I liked how you wrote down your words so sincerely, that you could write it off like that; I know how hard that can be. A great poem! Keep at it! The Reverse Edge Blade |
| kloun doll 2008-04-15 ch 1, | abuseit's touching, well, sometimes it's hard to say "I love you" but in the end things like this poem means a lot. |
| Peanuts Factory 2008-04-14 ch 1, | abuseThis is very sweet... Makes me very ashamed of myself. Mom, thank you for helping me grow. :) |
| Carablea 2008-04-14 ch 1, | abuseHey I loved this! specially the crow part. Moms are great aren't they? :) Mine's pretty cool, too, even tho you might get another idea from my writings here... :D Thanks for the review! |
| Tobyk947 2008-04-12 ch 1, | abuseI am deeply connected with my mother, so I can relate with this poem a lot. It's beautiful. |