Reviews for The tempest begins

mangahottie740.of.Dograb 2008-04-18 ch 2,	abuseI liked both of those chapters. It was good. You have a real talent for writing poetry.
Manuel Fajar 2008-04-16 ch 1,	abusenice description of how little things can lead to events that envelop us with such force that they overwhelm us. m
Random-Idiocity 2008-04-12 ch 2,	abuse''As all becomes numb'' excellent line. And I like the idea of making poems have chapters unless of course they were meant to be short stories. But either way they were both really good. Keep it Up!
Random-Idiocity 2008-04-12 ch 1,	abuseExcellent job. Everything flows and this just makes a really good piece. Keep it Up!