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| DSLuverGurl123 2008-08-18 ch 1,  | abuseHaha wow I wonder what ever happened to good old Joe. Does that mean he got the job? And Hallmark? Yea...didn't realize that until the end. This was cute though. :) And I was wondering...are all those holidays real or did you just make them up? Nice job on the challenge! -Katherine |
| paradiie 2008-07-12 ch 1, | abusehilarious. |
| elisefey 2008-06-24 ch 1, | abuseHaha!! Very entertaining. I loved every single moment of dialog, it was witty and fresh and real. :) |
| GrannyP 2008-06-19 ch 1, | abuseOh, how funny that they worked at Hallmark and had all the conversations about holidays and such. I guess you would get kind of tired of it if that's what you had to be around all the time. Very clever way to go about this challenge! |
| CassandraRose526 2008-06-15 ch 1, | abuseI liked all of the random Holiday references. It was very cute and you left the story open for addition, which is cool because you have quirky characters, which is always a plus in any story. Cassandra |
| JamieBell 2008-05-26 ch 1, | abuseFabulous! |
| Kohlomere 2008-04-30 ch 1, | abuseThat's great! Now Secretary's Day and Teacher's Day make sense because they really are terribly underappreciated those other ones are ridiculous! Sweet, E. |
| Le Meg 2008-04-14 ch 1, | abuseVery cute! I like all the random holiday names thrown in - good addition. Now if only random gorgeous men would walk into my job and kiss me! ;p |
| sketchingaCYNiC 2008-04-13 ch 1, | abusevery cute. i liked it! i laugh at all the hallmark holidays :] it reminds me of all the facebook events like "international be sexualy inappropriate day" hahaha. |
| friend 49 2008-04-13 ch 1, | abuseI love this! It was so fun to read, and I can tell you had a lot of fun writing it. You worked the requirements in quite brilliantly. Excellent job! |
| Lily Llynn 2008-04-13 ch 1, | abuseSaw your ad in Skow. Interesting challenge and an interesting response, but I'd love to see the actual challenge somewhere (preferrably, the top), just so we know what's going on. (: The writing's quite good, the characters entertaining, and the plot creative. I love the whole holidays thing. (: However, considering you classified this as Romance and this is a challenge response, I'd love to see more focus on the romance as opposed to the woes of being a secretary. Well, actually an equal balance of both would be good. (: Overall, a pretty good oneshot. I liked it. (: |
| mer-person 2008-04-12 ch 1, | abuseah. Hallmark, of course! love the story..maybe a sequal, yeah?? |