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softersin
2008-09-30
ch 1,
abuse"(i feel it most in my fingertips while i'm pretending not to care,
and it doesn't mean as much if i fold my arms into my sides before i can hold you in them...)"
That, was simply amazing.
You captured such depth in this poem and it brought out an emotional picture and made it as though i was there.

i loved it!
Lady Fingers
2008-04-28
ch 1,
abusethis is so intoxicating and magical
sad but fantastical
helplessly romantic and laced with need and want.
confident-poetic-lover06
2008-04-13
ch 1,
abuseYou, whomever you are, wrote this beautifully.Word usage and content of course was great. You were discrimtative and it put an image in mind, uh duh.lol. Other than I enjoyed reading you poem. Keep writting.

Ms. Mutanda
Quoven
2008-04-12
ch 1,
abuseI thought this was done very well, and a lot of fun to read. Thank you.
burning in effigy
2008-04-12
ch 1,
abuselove the style this is written in- filled with emotions but not bursting with them (if that makes sense..?)

"and i alone am merely choosing/to hear static instead of the things you/have to say."- you make me ecstatic with these tree lines

i like how the first two lines and the last two lines are formatted to connect and it just fits.

seriously, amazing job
Faith Adeline
2008-04-12
ch 1,
abuseamazing piece, great job :) I really enjoyed it. Keep it up!
Faith
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