 tonight we bloom 2009-08-09 . chapter 1wow, this was really really beautiful. the title is beautiful, as is the rest of the poem.
great word choice and emotion. i could read this 908 times.
i would love opinions from a talented writer like yourself on my work, it would mean a lot to me! |
 softersin 2008-09-30 . chapter 1"(i feel it most in my fingertips while i'm pretending not to care,
and it doesn't mean as much if i fold my arms into my sides before i can hold you in them...)"
That, was simply amazing.
You captured such depth in this poem and it brought out an emotional picture and made it as though i was there.
i loved it! |
 Lady Fingers 2008-04-28 . chapter 1this is so intoxicating and magical
sad but fantastical
helplessly romantic and laced with need and want. |
 confident-poetic-lover06 2008-04-13 . chapter 1You, whomever you are, wrote this beautifully.Word usage and content of course was great. You were discrimtative and it put an image in mind, uh duh.lol. Other than I enjoyed reading you poem. Keep writting.
Ms. Mutanda |
 Quoven 2008-04-12 . chapter 1I thought this was done very well, and a lot of fun to read. Thank you. |
 burning in effigy 2008-04-12 . chapter 1love the style this is written in- filled with emotions but not bursting with them (if that makes sense..?)
"and i alone am merely choosing/to hear static instead of the things you/have to say."- you make me ecstatic with these tree lines
i like how the first two lines and the last two lines are formatted to connect and it just fits.
seriously, amazing job |
 Faith Adeline 2008-04-12 . chapter 1amazing piece, great job :) I really enjoyed it. Keep it up!
Faith |