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| softersin 2008-09-30 ch 1, | abuse"(i feel it most in my fingertips while i'm pretending not to care, and it doesn't mean as much if i fold my arms into my sides before i can hold you in them...)" That, was simply amazing. You captured such depth in this poem and it brought out an emotional picture and made it as though i was there. i loved it! |
| Lady Fingers 2008-04-28 ch 1, | abusethis is so intoxicating and magical sad but fantastical helplessly romantic and laced with need and want. |
| confident-poetic-lover06 2008-04-13 ch 1, | abuseYou, whomever you are, wrote this beautifully.Word usage and content of course was great. You were discrimtative and it put an image in mind, uh duh.lol. Other than I enjoyed reading you poem. Keep writting. Ms. Mutanda |
| Quoven 2008-04-12 ch 1, | abuseI thought this was done very well, and a lot of fun to read. Thank you. |
| burning in effigy 2008-04-12 ch 1, | abuselove the style this is written in- filled with emotions but not bursting with them (if that makes sense..?) "and i alone am merely choosing/to hear static instead of the things you/have to say."- you make me ecstatic with these tree lines i like how the first two lines and the last two lines are formatted to connect and it just fits. seriously, amazing job |
| Faith Adeline 2008-04-12 ch 1, | abuseamazing piece, great job :) I really enjoyed it. Keep it up! Faith |