wow, this was really really beautiful. the title is beautiful, as is the rest of the poem.

great word choice and emotion. i could read this 908 times.

i would love opinions from a talented writer like yourself on my work, it would mean a lot to me!

"(i feel it most in my fingertips while i'm pretending not to care,
and it doesn't mean as much if i fold my arms into my sides before i can hold you in them...)"
That, was simply amazing.
You captured such depth in this poem and it brought out an emotional picture and made it as though i was there.

i loved it!

this is so intoxicating and magical
sad but fantastical
helplessly romantic and laced with need and want.

You, whomever you are, wrote this beautifully.Word usage and content of course was great. You were discrimtative and it put an image in mind, uh duh.lol. Other than I enjoyed reading you poem. Keep writting.

Ms. Mutanda

I thought this was done very well, and a lot of fun to read. Thank you.

love the style this is written in- filled with emotions but not bursting with them (if that makes sense..?)

"and i alone am merely choosing/to hear static instead of the things you/have to say."- you make me ecstatic with these tree lines

i like how the first two lines and the last two lines are formatted to connect and it just fits.

seriously, amazing job

amazing piece, great job :) I really enjoyed it. Keep it up!
Faith