Well, I'll submit a review, I mean, who could turn down being loved intensely? ;) Anyways, I liked this. Everyone feels this way sometimes, when they fall for a friend even though they'd make a horrible pair (I was pretty sure that's what you were getting at, but if I was wrong, oh well, that's how I interpreted it.) I enjoyed how it just got right to the point without going through a bunch og random cliche imagery or symbolism that you see in, like, every poem with this type of theme. Keep up the good work! :)

Your poems are always such great reads. They're inspirational, and I'm not just saying that. This one poem could make me write a story (which I haven't done except for today because I've been pretty lazy).

Nice job!

I like the whole percentage thing. It's really interesting and unique. The only thing is you only use commas and make it one really long sentence. I might make it into more. Other than that really nicely done!

i slightly thought about this yesterday,
but quickly stomped all over the idea.
[only because i thought you would want me to.]

This one lacks your usual rhythm and feeling. What happened? I hate to see you write so crappy. Things must really suck.

Boys suck. They fall for idiots. Just slap him - even if it doesn't make things all better, at least you'll FEEL better.

-stix-

Oh and by the way, I've seen pictures of you. You be gorgeous. =]

LOL well I am not sure I can handle intense love... but I will review nonetheless. I SERIOUSLY hope you are not talking about the same guy im thinking of... and the same girl... If you are, well *bangs head on desk* that just sucks. I wish he would chose a 100% of SOMETHING... at least the ride would end.

I love it, especially the ten/ninty percent thing.A bit of constuructive critism : when you say (except for the pretty part that's not me) I would take out the word 'except' because it makes it sound a bit like pretty is 90% in that sentence.