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| siphoned afterglow 2008-04-13 ch 1,  | abuseis this about you? thats the first thing thats pops in my mind, that it could be about yourself. but then, could be wrong. you could also be describing the hardships of life. excellant imagery, and its a strong piece. love it. -Alishya |
| East-0f-Eden 2008-04-13 ch 1, | abusenot sure I get the last two lines but I like the idea of the poem. It reminds me of Hatchet. (Did you ever read that?) |