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| Shadows in the Fire 2008-04-13 ch 1,  | abuseYou're 14? Anyone ever suggested that you could be, like, a prodigy or something? Because, seriously, this is AMAZING. I loved the visuals, the "shirt composed of cats". Wow. -Shadow |
| fields-of-Elysium 2008-04-13 ch 1, | abuseI'm not quite sure what this poem means, but it's beautiful. Good job. ~fields-of-Elysium |
| Tytherpol 2008-04-13 ch 1, | abusei love it. i would like it even more, i think, if the whole last stanza was omitted and for some reason "if she was gone this moment would feel like love." this bothers me but wow whoah amazing piece you're insanely good |
| losing gracie girl 2008-04-13 ch 1, | abusei like the imagery in this. the emotion is easy to feel. nice job. yours until the wind changes, gg |