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Moondog Dozier
2008-04-23
ch 1,
abuseThis is a good burst statement. It kind of sums up the use of everyday language in your last work. It's difficult to find that delicate balance between what people will understand-comprehend and the elegance of elevated language. True end statement for the most part. We all have a little jerkaholic in us. MD:77.
stick
2008-04-16
ch 1,
abuse**. I don't even know how you do this, but you have that perfect balance of complexity and simplicity, can explain things clearly, in an everyday format, but it still retains its art. I kind of hate you. Like the other reviewers said, last line was brilliant.
Jennifer
2008-04-14
ch 1,
abuseNo lie.

I like this one. Really. But i would like to come up with those elaborite phrases. They're just freaking cool.
me. moi. ich.
2008-04-13
ch 1,
abuseLove it. Very true (in some cases). :)
KaseyLovesNoOne
2008-04-13
ch 1,
abuseI adore this. The last line made me snicker a little. Definitely one of those "its funny because its true" moments.
burning in effigy
2008-04-13
ch 1,
abusehah love the idea for this poem and i like your thought process throughout the entire thing and how it changes

short but very forward poem

the ending was genius by the way
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