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| East-0f-Eden 2008-04-13 ch 1,  | abuseLoved the last line! It's a brilliant way to describe an Anarchist. Also I've never thought of sammon in the same context of lemmings. But now I see that they are alike. It's a wonderful poem. But, I think you should change your introduction. It reminded me of Elmer Fudd. |