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| losing gracie girl 2008-04-13 ch 1, | abusei. adore. this. poem. it is spectacular. i'm sorry that this is just going to be another 'nothing' poem but... wow yours until the wind changes, gg |
| fairytale failure 2008-04-13 ch 1, | abuseWay to be positive! I love your nice sunny thoughts in this poem. You had some really thought provoking lines, especially 'and the world can be given/the benefit of the doubt.' I liked the idea that people don't just pile up dead when they die, but its all part of a living cycle. |
| Disasters Disappointment 2008-04-13 ch 1, | abusehahaha... can i vote no? ... maybe not. sometimes its all pretty and such and other times its all bloody and ick. depends on the day of the week :] |