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losing gracie girl
2008-04-13
ch 1,
abusei.
adore.
this.
poem.
it is spectacular.
i'm sorry that this is just going to be another 'nothing' poem but...
wow

yours until the wind changes,
gg
fairytale failure
2008-04-13
ch 1,
abuseWay to be positive! I love your nice sunny thoughts in this poem. You had some really thought provoking lines, especially 'and the world can be given/the benefit of the doubt.' I liked the idea that people don't just pile up dead when they die, but its all part of a living cycle.
Disasters Disappointment
2008-04-13
ch 1,
abusehahaha...
can i vote no?
...
maybe not. sometimes its all pretty and such and other times its all bloody and ick. depends on the day of the week :]
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