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| perpetual questions 2008-04-13 ch 1,  | abusethe way you broke up the lines seemed a little odd to me in places, but nothing big. otherwise, nice. and fate, yes, it's all up to him. |
| losing gracie girl 2008-04-13 ch 1, | abusethis is amazing. i love the entire concept and the way it was constructed. keep up the good work. yours until the wind changes, gg |