Short and sweet. Straight to the point and funny. I enjoyed the 2 minutes. Write more

Yes, I have to say I definitely want more!

...Cackle

This makes you my hero! Hooray for microfiction!

Wow, I thought this was hilarious.
You have a really great sense of humor.
keep it up!

That was hilarious!

As for the repunzel one... always rinse and repeat, right?

ah, I wish I could think of more witty stuff to reply to your satire but alas I am being plagued by the non fairy tale world of homework. Hey... wait... was that considered witty? ahk!

hm... I don't get this one.

SOrry

But I like the last line

Of course
once upon a time
and
happily ever after...

what else is there?

good job. I definitely think you should write more, with the emphasis on the MORE part.

Zonne
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This is great. I should complain because there is no explanation of the story, but I can't

Ah Alice... Wonder what would happen if Alice and Hansel got together.

This one was a lol

good job
Zonne

Aw.. sorry, kind of disappointed in that one.

THough I get the shampoo bit, but I see your great sense of humor

How could you pass the opportunity to mock a hair rope climbing prince?

I sure as heck wouldn't want to be rescued that way.

Anyway, looking forward to the next one.

they are funny

Zonne

That is hysterical

The best one yet, by far.

Great job.

Is instep one word or two or hyphenated? I suppose you probably looked it up and have it right. I learned something new

Zonne

Very cute and I agree

I always kind of wondered.. WHAT is the Point of that story??

Don't eat a strangers porridge. Heck, I wouldn't eat any!

Very funny. I'm glad you added more this time

Zonne

Cute

I love that line.

But how does that fairy tale go?

Okay, so I know, but c'mon, you coulda come up with a bunch of great lines for this one!

Rock on
Zonne

Hey, that's not 55 words,

however, point well made!

Another good little laugh

Zonne

I think you could have at least threw in the 100 years instead of several days. That's how I recall it anyway. The original, NOT the disney version

I like the beginning of this about the homocidal maniac. Very funny.

Zonne

THat was better, this one really summarized the story ... well

completely but kind of ... sarcastic

but then again, your line at the end brought the sarcasm into light didn't it?

lol

Good job
Zonne