Reviews for Prayers Are A Weakness

Nemonus 2008-04-25 ch 1,	abuseI can simply agree with you about the ending--it isn't terrible (I thought it was fine), but it is for you to say whether it's what you wanted. :) Very good. Very painful experience you've described here, and worded well, and the cycle of pain and weakness is understandably painful as well as well-explained.
ohthevoices 2008-04-18 ch 1,	abuseI always hate how people tell you not to cry, because it's weakness. I liked this one; it left a lot to think about.
lookin4nemo 2008-04-14 ch 1,	abusewow its dark! I LIKE! it is an unhappy ending but it leaves something for the reader to come up with
Faith Adeline 2008-04-13 ch 1,	abuseI liked it. I thought it was a good ending for this piece. great job! Faith
fields-of-Elysium 2008-04-13 ch 1,	abuseThat was heartbreaking. I like the way you use the parentheses and the italics. Good job, and well written. ~fields-of-Elysium